How do you know that
When you miss…..
It is me not her
How do you know that
the taste of my lips are the ones you long for
The moment I share with you means everything
but does it mean the world to you
How do I know that when you give me your most intimate embrace
It is me not her you think of
My soul, the very essence of my existence
Tell me that in these eyes that I stare
it is me not her you imagine.
hahaha very direct statement- well done!
love for one never for two , a nice poem , well delivered.
the questions, the confidence, the need to know and the boldness to ask “does it mean the world to you”
I really enjoyed this..sometimes my greatest rival is me.
@ D.S Lear…..guess it will be fun to have a rival in ourselves.will serve as a check. glad you enjoyed reading it.
this is good.
Nicely done actually
Sad but hopeful. Ultimately beautiful. Good workxx
@ shanellis every tear drop has a story to tell,you wipe them and say ‘this one too shall/will pass’. thanks
haunting
@ unprecedentedintellectual, we always discover when haunting.
Wow this is very deep. The romantic heart is always the one that thinks these thoughts. I like this a lot. thanks for sharing, a heart felt poem.
alan
@Alan thanks 🙂
nice. glad you dared to go there…a haunting question…and i hope your answer is true…
@brian….now dat’s a tough one
Oh, the rebound love, when to know if you’re the one…such a hard place to be, good job in portraying that emotion.
@suzicate, it’s a hard job finding out …guess you just have to believe in you
oh i can relate to this one all to well – well done.
lol……thanks u all,love makes us all writers.
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This poem cuts to the heart of wanting to know the truth. Very powerful lines.
very genuine questions.
lovely poem.
i am here from Jingle’s rally for poets.
peace n happiness.
Hard to read as a man. I felt guilty at times. Nicely done.
yes, always on your mind if there maybe another woman….bkm
well done…bkm
What is inner security if one can’t trust. I like your poem.
I can certainly relate to this, very beautiful and well done!
love demands all of someone else. this is an honest and direct poem. beautifully done:]
i saw you at alan’s site (for thursday poets’ rally). what a soulful poem you have here. sad and romantic… a heart crying out for reassurance. beautiful piece! =)
Happy Birthday Virge
Happy Belated Birthday…
strong emotions and lovely poem.
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love can be so painful at times… specially when not reciprocated in favour … very touching poem…
Heartfelt!
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
That triggered a chord inside of me.. beautifully written!
Lovely….A beautiful piece from the innermost soul reflected in Poetry. Nice work…Cheers!
thanks Emmanuel.
u know, this was my fav one…u rock