I have nothing to gain
Everything I stand to lose
Yet I find me yearning for that which will cause me pain
Pain, sweet, sweet, pain
Pain that takes the form of a man
Wild, seductive and charming
Awakening every sense
Breathless his kisses leave me
Reality a painful reminder sets in
I recall; my pleasure is another s
Another is the custodian of that who gives me pleasure.
Memories alive and vibrant
The present cold and still
The past so alive it weakens my limbs
Sin so sweet; pain worth enduring
Memories of sin so sweet
Yet pain awaits
beautiful words,
lovely images and full of emotional struggles which is cool.
Very strong words, sweet and pain. Life is filled with both and it is the love and sweetness that should always stay.
Love is funny,isnt it…even when we know its not right, we cant help but longing for that person…loved ur poem:)
@hoiden…exactly
Tragic… is this about a past lover? Or about loving a bad boy when you should love a good boy? ;3
@ Gally, its about falling madly and hopelessly in love with someone who’s taken,basically faliing in love with the wrong guy.
what sweet allure..the road to death…
@ sweet allure ….fighting the urge to love,to desire,to express ur emotions.. dat kills.
hmmm vivid!
can feel the pain in every word!
lovely poem…. good writing….
a phase everyone is through!
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@dancingfreak thanks for the compliment.
vivid emotion, as the saying goes tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all.
@ suzicate you rite..love is a beautiful risk
aahhh.. pain in love.. is pain indeed… 🙂
beautiful lines there dear 🙂
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aaah the sweetest pleasure and the most terrible pain hidden in loving someone.. beautiful poem! (:
here’s the link for my poem,
@shaguftaabbas…Happy u enjoyed reading it
wow…is sentimental!! nice one.
I love this poem, esp
“Sin so sweet; pain worth enduring
Memories of sin so sweet:”
I can’t wait to read more.
@ Seth ……….thanks and will be posting one today.
wonderful
Very brilliant piece Naa, Kudos.
Hmm!!!! but I am quite curious; well…
Really nice!!! Love to love but yet scared of hurt!!!!
But really that is life for you BITTER SWEET TASTE